The last decade has witnessed an increasing trend of working at home with the support of technological advancements . While some people think that only workers can benefit from this , I belive it has positive effects on both employees and employers.
To begin with , there are a lot of advantages of modern technologies for workers who work at their home. Firstly , teleworking can help employees save their time which is often spent for commuting to work . Therefore, they might have more time for other activities that help them relaxing such as travelling or watching movies with their families . Secondly , home-working employees do not have to pay for any private of public transportations . Instead, that money can be used for investing to create more values. Finally , those who choose to work at their home might take care of their families better. For example , home workers could do some activities which help tightening their family bonds such as gathering family members at lunch and contacting with their children .
In contrast, I think telecommuting also benefits employers for some notable reasons. Firstly , allowing employees to work at their home could be more financially efficient because entrepreneurs would not have to cover the cost of running offices such as renting cost and hiring housekeeping staff cost. In addition, people who work at their home could improve their productivity because they work in their ideal environments , thus, they generate more values for their companies. Finally, if employers allow employees to work at home , it may lead to the satisfaction of workers . As a result , the employee turnover rate are reduced and workers will work at their best and be loyal to their companies .
In conclusion, nowadays, modern technology plays an important role in our lives. With the huge support of technology, telecommuting is becoming a trend throughout the world and in my opinion , it will bring advantages for both employees and employers.
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- Some people think that young people should follow the tradition of the society Others think that young people should be free to behave as individual Discuss both views and give your opinion
- Some people think that young people should follow the tradition of the society Others think that young people should be free to behave as individual Discuss both views and give your opinion
- Many people say that we have developed into a throw away society because we are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of To want degree do you agree with this opinion 85
- Some people think the news has no connection to people s lives so it is a waste of time to read the news in the newspaper and watch television news programmes To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24050632911 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90405580274 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550632911392 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4428609275 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4375 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216629140766 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087201978995 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789352080588 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154513000022 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10445235754 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.