Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. So it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch TV news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people consider receiving the latest news from newspapers and television shows to be time-consuming. While I accept that there are some reasons why mass communication is believed to be unrelated to the real world, I completely disagree with this view. In my opinion, this kind of information plays a vital role in our lives.
Admittedly, information from press or TV news programs may sometimes not appeal to a number of readers and audiences. The main reason is that due to their different interests and concerns, people may only pay attention to the news featuring the subjects they find interesting. For instance, sport-minded individuals tend to be fascinated by reading sport news, while businessman often look forward to updates on the economic situation. On the other hand, watching or reading the news which is irrelevant to people’s interests seems to be a waste of time to them.
Nevertheless, there is no doubt that media news is closely associated with our daily lives. Newspapers and TV programs are claimed to be the fastest ways to acquire new information about every aspect of life. Due to broadcasting technology, news is transmitted to the public as soon as the information is collected and edited, and that helps people keep up with the changes and event occurring worldwide. For example, the COVID-19 pandemic has become one of the most serious health crises in human history. Without everyday news, people may hardly know about its origin and spread, and how to protect ourselves from this disease. Moreover, media news is also influential in shaping public opinion. Numerous conflicts take place because people have vastly different ideas on the same thing, or new ideas which are contrary to familiar concepts. Through the media, people can comprehend fully the situation of their community, and also innovative developments. In this way, people can share the same general knowledge and strengthen mutual understanding.
In conclusion, due to the diversity of people’s concern, some audiences may find media news irrelevant to the real world. News has close connections to our daily lives from providing information to forming public opinions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2435530086 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91676189265 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578796561605 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4851032775 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61111111111 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320388814862 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949365898563 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062430911226 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194777502793 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398359535505 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.