The chart demonstrate people’s drinking habits and buying coffee and tea in five Australian cities over the last 4 weeks.
In general, in Sydnay people prefer buying fresh coffee it is approximately 44% than in Bribone, there are people drinking fresh coffee only 34%. In addition in Brisbone and in Sydney buying instant coffee more popular than fresh coffee it contain 46% in Sydney and 53 % in Brisbone. Furthermore people prefer to go a cafe in both city.
Likewise, in Melbourne and Hobart people drinking fresh coffee less than instant coffee. in Melbourne buying fresh coffee more than in Hobat,in Melbourne is almost 44% and in Hobart is 38%. The both city’s people go to a cafe similarly it contain 63%. By contrast, the other four cities, Adelaide go to the cafes less than others and drinking fresh coffee only 34% and drinking instant coffee more then fresh it contain 50%.
It is noticeable that the city Adelaide go to a cafe less and drinking fresh coffee less then other three cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, likewise, similarly, then, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9011627907 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40964904086 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453488372093 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9894879962 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204455542347 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114985611816 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964593570349 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17866026966 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115438661221 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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