No one can deny, people connect with each others easily as well as get the information related to whole world with the help of technology. Presently, some proportion of masses reckon that newspaper proved the reliable information on the affordable rate. On the other hand, few people believed internet is best mode of getting information. According to my perception, getting information thought the internet is faster and time consuming, newspapers therefore, is best source for those person who do not have much knowledge about internet and it is also pocket friendly.
To commence with, nowadays people have a numerous modes of get information with the help of technology. Internet sources is fastest and effective method. In recent time, each and every person use the mobile phones and laptops and many more things, this all are connected with the internet facilities. So, today generations easily get the knowledge thought this smart gadgets any where and any time. To explicate, we live in modern era, today people want to know everything about what happen in the whole world. So, they also have lot of method to get knowledge about it. Internet facility give global news to each and every person. Nowadays, people able to watch the video, audio clips at the same time when news where happen. To instance, people know about the recent news within a few seconds with the help of internet. Nowadays, the numerous news channels do the live telecast on the spot. So, on the same time news were watched by people. According to me, In this era, it is very effective method in order to getting reliable information.
Furthermore, As elderly generation do not have much knowledge about the internet, newspaper is best media source for those people in order to getting knowledge. This source of media is very cheaper as well as proved the correct information. To explain, each and every person are not able to use the internet and so people who live below the poverty line they can not afford the expanses of mobile phone or internet. So, i think newspaper is best method for those people. Secondly, it has been seen elder people especially, above 60 years old are keen about reading newspaper, and they addicted about it. So, newspapers is best source for getting knowledge about globe by my point of view.
To conclude, both methods proved the reliable information as well as both are effective. According to me, people are give the preference to internet and newspaper according their generations. internet method more used by the young generation and senior citizens keen about the newspapers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ther hand, few people believed internet is best mode of getting information. According ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'those people', 'those persons'?
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...he knowledge thought this smart gadgets any where and any time. To explicate, we live in...
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...ts any where and any time. To explicate, we live in modern era, today people want...
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...methods proved the reliable information as well as both are effective. According to me, pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, i think, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2163.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98387096774 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58968647422 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44930875576 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 695.7 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6710930982 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.52 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.36 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269793081364 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845779114358 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647464768636 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191766703751 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648241233207 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.