Now we are living in the era of information and technology. Due to the improvement of technology the circulation of information is a thousand times faster than the printed media. Nevertheless, some people believe that newspapers are the best medium to know the report, while others believe that the internet or other sources are far better than the newspapers. In the following paragraphs, both views will be discussed and finally, I will give comments from my perspective.
On the one hand, from many eras, newspapers are more reliable for information to people. Before writing an article a journalist has to do much research and analysis such as after doing many years of investigating a journalist published an article on Boston Catholic child sex exploitation which was very helpful for people to be conscious. If there are any wrong or misleading words then it can create contentious issues not only locally but also internationally that is why newspapers are more secure to acquire knowledge. In addition, it not only highlights the problems but also gives the solutions. People don't have to search for news to different portals without this he or she can get the whole world in his hand.
On the other hand, in the contemporary time different online news media is more popular to people because people are now more used to touch the screen of handheld devices. The internet makes it possible to make the world smaller and through this people can easily know whatever they want whenever they want. For online news sites, people can see the live situation of a place and get faster information than printed newspapers. For example, Facebook is one of the popular social mediums from which people can get a lot of information which is aggregated from various articles and it spreads faster because of its sharing ability. Though questions always arise about the reliability of online news, it is easier for people to catch and acquire.
In conclusion, nowadays people are more dependent on the internet for gathering news and information. To sum up all the points above, from my view I can say online is far better to learn the news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, nevertheless, so, then, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95290858726 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76320197967 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548476454294 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4860696939 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291750380291 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896982965051 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807997640198 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188437015115 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116152536453 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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