Some people think that only the society should be blamed for only anti social activities. what are the causes for these activities? who is responsible for them.
Anti social behaviour also develops through social interaction within the family and community. It is undoubtedly the case that is society behind the main reasons to promoting the anti social activities or not? In this essay, I will examine the possible reasons for this trend and suggest some of the practical polices meausers that authority and individual could implements to eradicate this problem from society.
The first step is to understand why is this happening. Broadly speaking, there two and three main reasons for this. The first and foremost is the education of the people, if people have uneducated they not aware the rules of the society and the do the activities against the society. A good illustrated is laws are made for the humans to function in an order manner. Moreover, if the society does not make the rule the people certainly fall into the bad company and they dusrecpecting other's lives, rights or property.
To continue with my view points, one of the causes of that could be the unemployment because if the person has no job the feel stressed and in the pressurize they do the work against the society. To epitomized, if the people has not job and they do not fullfill their needs so complete their desires they do the anti social activities for the money. Last but not least, sometime people gave mentally problem so, in the pressure of this problem they work against the society and harm the social places and things.
In conclusion, there are variety of different factors that have led to make this problem worse. While it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this, this could probably be solve by the government should provided the jobs to the prople as well as the society set of rules or orders to follow it. Without these rules or laws, any society is deemed to fail.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, broadly speaking, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7570977918 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48346140119 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523659305994 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5718571411 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.714285714 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216632001201 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738689472505 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042222957853 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130416587015 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298857270168 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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