Some people think that parent should teach children how to be good members of a society. others however believe that school is the place to learn this.
Some believe that parents close relations to teach their children how to become part of society, while others believe that school offers a better curriculum to learn this. Although professional teachers offer better information in the school, the parents take responsibility fully to prepare their children able to be good members of society.
On the one hand, the school may be a better place to get knowledge, the fact that most of their teachers are highly skilled professionals. Many of their teachers are a highly educational background that qualified to teach the academic lesson for the student such as social, religious, and norms in the society. School may give children practical experiences that may encourage them to sociable with other peoples.
On the other hand, parents play an important role to teach their children basic moral value and responsibilities to society. The things kids learn from their parents provide them the guideline how to behave with their junior and respect to the elder. Parents mostly spend much more time with their children than the teachers do. While school or teacher do not have enough time and attention to all of their students.
In conclusion, although the school provides professional teacher and engage their student to be good members of society. I believe parents are a leading role in the process forming children to assimilate into society immediately.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'kid'.
Suggestion: kid
...responsibilities to society. The things kids learn from their parents provide them t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24669603524 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72387799711 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533039647577 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6063075617 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.272727273 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351227267479 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143225422955 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101701794351 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239993902234 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114373734864 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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