It is true that, in this contemporary era, parents are being focused on their children in a better way. However, number of individuals intropect that all activities of children should be supervised by parents whereas, other masses beleive that more liberty should be given to offsprings by parents. According to my perspective, freedom is the best option for children to live their own life.
To commence with, during childhood they are able to grow their creativity easily and use their potential power to grow themselves in all aspects. Secondly, good decision making power can be build by them if parents would give freedom to take their decisions themselves. Additionally, in some aspects like in clothes, education whatever they want to wear or do parents should support them. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that those children are capable to do almost everything and more happy who have freedom instead of those children who have no freedom.
Looking at the other view, parents should also focus or take of their children. Moreover, if parents do not concentrate on their children sometimes then bad habbits are started to adapt by children like kidnapping, murder, stealing things from people. Secondly, attention should be given on their activities by parents because in this modern era, they waste their more time in playing games, talking with their friends and so on. Eventually, parents should correct their children mistakes. Thirdly, parents should make some strict rule for their children routine as well. For instance, in my neighborhood, one boy used to live his parents were not able to give focus on him after that he fell in bad habbits and one day he was caught by police.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly parents can give attention towards their children for providing better life yet, we must understand that sometimes parents start hurting their children as the name of focus. Furthermore, I personally contemplate that parents should give freedom to their children rather than stopping them.
- Some people think parents should supervise their children s activity closely while others believe that children should have more freedom discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people think parents should supervise their children s activity closely while others believe that children should have more freedom discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- in their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some ways Why is this Do you think this is a positive or negative development 78
- Some people think parents should supervise their children s activity closely while others believe that children should have more freedom discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of a house or a building they are living in What are the reasons for this How can people research this 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, whereas, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17117117117 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66605788035 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552552552553 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1709865608 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.8 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414574064834 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169454116143 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080015366807 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281720534834 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450085480577 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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