It is true that, in this contemporary era, concentrate is being given on children in a better way by parents. However, number of individuals intropect that all activities of children should be supervised by parents whereas, other masses and according to my perspective, liberty should be given by parents.
To commence with, during childhood they are able to develop their creativity easily and use their potential power to grow themselves in all aspects. Secondly, decision making power can be build by them if parents would give freedom to take their decisions themselves. Additionally, in some aspects like in clothes, education whatever they want to wear or do parents should support them. Another reason could be, when children would start talking with different people they can easily built their confidence level and never faced fear while talking. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that those children are capable to do almost everything and more happy who have freedom instead of those children who have no freedom.
Looking at the other view, parents should also give focus on their children. Moreover, if parents do not concentrate on their children sometimes then bad habbits are started adapting by children like kidnapping, murder, stealing things from people. Secondly, teenagers activities should be closely monitored by parents because in this modern era, they waste their more time in playing games, talking with their friends and so on but parents should never hurt their children. Eventually, parents should correct their children mistakes. Thirdly, parents should make some strict rule for their children routine as well. For instance, when I was a child, my parents used to give focus on my activities and if, I used to do any mistake then they help me for correcting that. I am very glad that I have supportive parents that is why I have never done any big mistake.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly parents can give attention towards their children for providing better life yet, we must understand that sometimes parents start hurting their children as the name of focus. Furthermore, I personally contemplate that parents should give freedom to their children rather than stopping them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 485, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
...g with different people they can easily built their confidence level and never faced ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, whereas, while, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2243767313 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66703048702 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551246537396 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7477162927 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.875 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429413126749 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166530461159 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918284700157 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270004291112 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707580164893 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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