Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is sometimes argued whether parents must have the responsibility for the way they teach their children to become good people of society. While some people think that is the problem of school. Although the second opinion is supported by many people, from my own people perspective, the other one makes more sense.
First and foremost, a convincing reason for parents should teach children is that family is the best family foundation. Children should be taught by their family when they were young, because of it very important to build the behavior of children. For example, when children drink or eat something outside, they know that they need to put the trash and do not throw it away. Another angle can be seen in the fact that because parents always have a responsibility to teach their children. Parents can teach children from their love and they can feel this love. For instance, from parents' love, they can understand why parents want they become good people in society.
On the other hand, people with a contrasting viewpoint argued that responsibility belongs to the school. Firstly, school and family are the difference place for children to be taught. For example, at primary school children will be met many students, and they communicate with people from whole variety. Probably, to those who are against school should teach children, there is some truth in the idea that the experience of communicating with people will make them co-operate with each other and contribute they the way to connect with people of society.
In conclusion, both their parents and school should help children to become active and good people of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02181818182 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53985357813 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490909090909 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3942533579 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298096965902 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127084287495 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599820851813 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220183324883 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418596555086 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.