Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Most people think that sport relates to physical abilities, and following this idea that physical strength is considered to be more important in playing and being success in sport than mental toughness. However, form my perspectives, both skills play equal roles in making a sportman great.
Physical strength is the basic require and on the other hand, it is the purpose of anyone who is training sport too. Having good health and stamina help sportmen gain their level of goals in competition. Some sports have high demands for physical abilities and without them, players can never succeed, such as athletics, gymnastics, wieghtlifting, ect. But the fact is that the most attractive subjects of sports are head to head subjects, like soccer, tennis, volleyball, basketball, ect. In those parts of sport, we can realise that the winners, usually, is not the one who is the strongest, but the one who is both strong and smart. Sone sports legends can prove this idea such as Roger Federer in tennis, Lionel Messi in soccer, Stephen Curry in basketball. They are not the biggest, tallest or fastest in their fields, but the way of combining both physical and mental abilities helped them to get their current honors. Moreover, a small part of sports whis is not head to head type, requires the intelligence rather than muscle as chess, esport, ect. These sports may be unregular with many people, but they are strong evidences to counter the thinking that strength is everything we need to succeed in sport.
Overall, playing sports with both muscles and brain makes us easier to win the competition and we need to train them equally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th is considered to be more important in playing and being success in sport than ...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: head-to-head
... most attractive subjects of sports are head to head subjects, like soccer, tennis, volleyba...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: head-to-head
...ver, a small part of sports whis is not head to head type, requires the intelligence rather ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96727272727 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53409412964 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592727272727 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8675485835 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.833333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247374924933 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809218679597 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930587250628 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165702702162 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103168714429 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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