It is obvious that playing sport is essential for health and metal so that people usually play for resting after a hard workday. In some opinions, mental strength plays a more pivotal rule than physical strength for getting good result in sport. Personally, each has its own perks, but I tend to learn towards the importance of mental health.
However, the importance of endurance cannot be refused. The primary reason is the robust constitution. If you have a large frame, you will have enough strength and weight of your body to squash others as in player soccer did. Likewise, the strength of your arms and legs also helps you getting achieve in sport. The durability literally maintains the sports math and still have enough energy for power shoot as in soccer maths for playing a long time. Therefore, the importance of physical strength is the key to not only maintaining but also getting the goal.
On the slip side, mental strength is more indispensable than physical strength. Apparently, if you are in good mood, you will be a skillful player because of your comfort and confidence. Therefore, you play smoothly and given complete freedom to create some wonderful skill while you are enjoying playing math sport. The better temper you have, the more influent you play. For instance, soccer players keep in good shape for the whole time in math, they will get more goals. Moreover, achievement in sport also depends on the passion of the players. They have to get involved enough in their favorite sport in other to handle enjoyably the math in the best way.
In conclusion, the importance of mental and physical strength is the same because they depend on each other. However, I support that mental strength is the key to success math because playing in good mood is the best way to win the game.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 286, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to get' or 'get'.
Suggestion: to get; get
...th of your arms and legs also helps you getting achieve in sport. The durability litera...
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Line 2, column 351, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... The durability literally maintains the sports math and still have enough energy for p...
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Line 3, column 662, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dle enjoyably the math in the best way. In conclusion, the importance of mental ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82636655949 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46104039863 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511254019293 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1509270469 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.3888888889 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2777777778 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302306183878 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103698771597 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760602908288 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21020796801 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495992957759 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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