Some people think that private schools should be banned because they give students an unfair advantage on others.
To what extend do you agree or disagree
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Write at least 250 words.
Some people contend that private schools provide an unfair advantage on others, therefore, they should be banned However,others oppose such contention.
To begin with, private schools should not be banned because, they produce highly intelligent and competitive individuals. In Botswana for example, top performances of the final examinations are always from private schools. It is not worth doubting that these individuals are going to be great asserts to the country as well as employers. Consequently boosting the country’s economic due to productivity hence private schools do not account f...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.190909090909 0.247107183377 77% => OK
Verbs: 0.184848484848 0.155533422707 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.136363636364 0.0946595960268 144% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0727272727273 0.0501214627716 145% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0272727272727 0.0437548338989 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0909090909091 0.122226691241 74% => OK
Participles: 0.0606060606061 0.0403226058552 150% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8956500918 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0363636363636 0.0326793684256 111% => OK
Particles: 0.0030303030303 0.00163938923432 185% => OK
Determiners: 0.0848484848485 0.0861772015684 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0242424242424 0.021408717616 113% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0212121212121 0.011925033212 178% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1848.0 1933.35771543 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.39446366782 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.429065743945 0.374742101984 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.339100346021 0.28420135186 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18339100346 0.203846283523 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124567474048 0.137316102897 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8956500918 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.037074148 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567474048443 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 59.46072965 60.7387585426 98% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0555555556 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4063864701 49.517814964 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 127.492653851 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0555555556 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 0.814263465372 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 49.9655901576 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.20212765957 1.69124875643 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237399477069 0.332605444948 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115126927829 0.102741220458 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0948704308783 0.0668466124924 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.573627832637 0.534860350844 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.195997854602 0.148594505496 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968171971509 0.134430193775 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673233282562 0.0742795772207 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.23009033703 0.324371583561 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0986785974289 0.0638462369009 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16284099106 0.228012699653 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069972915485 0.058150111329 120% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 5.90881763527 203% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 10.4468937876 153% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.