some people think that rhe government should be responsible for crime prevention ,while others believe that it is the reponsibility of the individual protect themselves.
discuss both sides and give your opinion.
some poeple believe that the government is responsible against commit a crime, however the others say protection of them is an individual duty. I think both opinion can be right , but the responsibility of government in this matter is vital important.
on the one hand , some people feel the government ought to safe of whole people against social dangare and protection of occuring crimes . It can be acceptable but not 100 peresent ,for instance when every one goes on a trip who needs to protect against offenders that are around them so the government should be make different law for avoiding every offences . hence some one that is guilty does not dare to break the law.
one the other hand,whomever believe that all people must protect themselves of dangeres surround in everywhere and at all times.all the same, this idea is right but I think every person can not safe themselves completely ,against who is offend and make nuisance because there is a possiblity that criminals upsurge in situations at particularly time. so that people can not able to have totally individual defend.
consequently ,both ideas is correct ,but those are complement for reaching to strong protection since the government have more imortant role in the matter
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, for instance, i think, all the same
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02415458937 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77848022883 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599033816425 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.6611134942 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330960821523 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142205809358 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686149179185 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197312907688 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919165026102 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.