In this modren epoch tourist industry plays vital role in developing countries for earning handsome amount of money due to which these countries are becoming more rich and the rift between wealthy and poor countries is increasing day by day.I endorse this assertion and this essay will discuss the arguments in favor of my view point before the conclusion is drawn.
To embark with,there are multitudinous benefits with are becoming ubiquitous in rich countries nad aids in there development.firstly,education system in rich countries is well developed but lack of facilities in poor countries lead country underdeveloped .secondly,all the skilled people migrate to rich countries due to lack of job opportunities in there country this proves to be harmful for the development of poor countries. thirdly,rich countries should help the poor countries by sharing natural resources with them for there development.
Moving further, government in rich countries should aid poor countries by imparting financial help to them.inspite of this,health center should be opened in the rural area's in poor countries for providing better facilities to the people living below poverty line.moreover,rich countries should launch new products in poor countries for improving the living standard of people.
In the epilogue, i want to discern that rich countries should provide help to the poor countries in each and every field and requirement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56621004566 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41011218578 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552511415525 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.095995362 49.4020404114 265% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 243.8 106.682146367 229% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.8 20.7667163134 211% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.4 7.06120827912 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345125920375 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.231018037063 0.084324248473 274% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639517308006 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237312465644 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771865770317 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.7 13.0946893788 204% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.91 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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