Man has moves through the age of mammoth to the era of advanced robotic technology. Today people started doing their chores of long distance sitting at their room without leaving their favorite chair this had been made possible with many success over within an outside planet. Till now many people have controversy about the future development has major role of Robert while others claims that Roberts are dangerous for humankind having negative effect on society. In my point I think Robert will have a great role of futher succeed in technology of human existence as well as in development though it will surely have some of the drawbacks behind.
Firstly, Robert is the greatest achievement of twentieth centuary. Moreover a centuary its has got lots of achievement that’s really need to be discussed in positive ways. Firstly conducting research, they have helped conducting difficult task with its features of storing data, comparing and contrasting the differences and many more. National aeronautics and space administration have robort for purpose of study outside the space and many over their success handed towards Robert. Robert is man made as like appearance of human with extra memory capacity, power,and feature that are unique any kind found in earth. It can perform works done as per thousands person at once and minimize number of skilled manpower. Most of the countries today are using it as helper of industries and agriculture field for different works.Many movies are created as showing its importance as it can be a good friend of human understanding their feeling and caring them. It can be said with confidence that for the future development of our offspring will have victory over new research over every field by the help of robort and its better advancement.
Secondly, it can have some of the cons left behind the pros. It has got capacity to do numbers of works done within a short time thats really will cause lack of employment which will increase the rate of unemployment rates in future. Moreover, criminal activities will be increased as using Roberts as robbery, murdered any many illegal activities that will harm on the lives of people. Likewise Robert can be self harming for users too as self activating of its function and over research for creation making it advance. It can takes the lives of many person with destroying the man made creations. Thus more cautious is needed for handling it.
In conclusion, we can not said that robort are completely friendly for us it can be dangerous if we don’t take it carefully. It can be a major part of success for development in every part in future as it engaged in conducting research and additionally it can be used as doing tough outside works. This is the period of technology with work doing limiting the energy and gain more success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
... chair this had been made possible with many success over within an outside planet. ...
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Line 1, column 620, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... development though it will surely have some of the drawbacks behind. Firstly, Robert is...
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Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...test achievement of twentieth centuary. Moreover a centuary its has got lots of achievem...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...centuary its has got lots of achievement that's really need to be discussed ...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to conduct' or 'conduct'.
Suggestion: to conduct; conduct
...y conducting research, they have helped conducting difficult task with its features of sto...
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Line 3, column 571, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
... human with extra memory capacity, power,and feature that are unique any kind found ...
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Line 3, column 658, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'thousands'' or 'thousand's'?
Suggestion: thousands'; thousand's
...earth. It can perform works done as per thousands person at once and minimize number of s...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Many
...d agriculture field for different works.Many movies are created as showing its impor...
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Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...r advancement. Secondly, it can have some of the cons left behind the pros. It has got c...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...mbers of works done within a short time thats really will cause lack of employment wh...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...increase the rate of unemployment rates in future. Moreover, criminal activities will be ...
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Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
... that will harm on the lives of people. Likewise Robert can be self harming for users to...
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Line 5, column 530, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
... for creation making it advance. It can takes the lives of many person with destroyin...
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Line 5, column 549, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun person seems to be countable; consider using: 'many people', 'many persons'.
Suggestion: many people; many persons
...g it advance. It can takes the lives of many person with destroying the man made creations....
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Line 5, column 601, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...with destroying the man made creations. Thus more cautious is needed for handling it...
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Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'say'
Suggestion: say
...ndling it. In conclusion, we can not said that robort are completely friendly for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, likewise, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2383.0 1615.20841683 148% => OK
No of words: 476.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00630252101 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66311904685 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 753.3 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3922482611 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.476190476 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131386069161 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385987777255 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048004224207 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830580731671 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657945567169 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.