Some people think that robots are very important for humans’ future development. Other, however, think that robots are a dangerous invention that could have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are a variety of reasons elucidating why robots are the negative development. It is evident that inventing robots could increase the unemployment or underemployment rate. Labourers state that their jobs will be replaced by automatic machinery as the robots can constantly work, with them considering themselves less productive and competitive. Taiwanese blue-collar workers, in particular, are aware that their employers are prone to importing automatic machinery to substitute for labourers. In addition, psychologists demonstrate that individuals who have heavy dependence on machines become indolent, developing an aimless future. For instance, statistics show that people in the U.S. have less awareness of future plans as they heavily rely on advanced technological machines.
However, the use of robots can be rather beneficial to the world. Firstly, the effectiveness of productivity can be maximised by utilising robots. This is predominantly because the artificial intelligence machines are able to do effective and efficient calculation, avoiding excessive and unnecessary errors and expenditure. When the robotic arms were invented, Apple company argued that manufacturing an iPhone costs them less than before, and its accuracy has remarkably been improved. Besides, the issue of safety in workplace can be tackled by introducing latest robots. They equip with the innovative alarming system, protecting workers from danger at work.
In conclusion, although the development of robots might have negative impacts on the society, I regard this invention as a successful innovation to humans’ lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92765957447 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26548544652 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.693617021277 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8586259067 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225831117332 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738622021329 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623910620673 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157511839197 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557452476081 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.82 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.11 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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