Some people think that the role of parents is to discipline their children and
teach them about right or wrong (SIDE A). Other people consider that the main
responsibility of parents is to nurture their children and provide them with a safe
environment to grow up in. (SIDE B).
DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.
Moving towards the 21 century, a large number of people are nowadays expressing a deeply growing concern about the roles of parents. n fact, there are some who hold firmly to their belief that parents discipline their children and teach them about justice morals. However, other argue convincingly that they nurture and provide children with a safe environment
To begin with, there are two primary points for people to defend the former argument discipline to secondary to the provision of protection and satisfaction of basic needs. First of all, it is a well - documented fact that children should receive everything they need for their well - being including shelter food and safety. The most obvious example to prove that giving children necessary support and freedom will allow them to form their own unique mindset, but maintaining reasonable levels of discipline will mold them into emotionally stable individuals. Furthermore, there s no doubt that children can not be treated as adults and expected to follow stringent rules, but instead should be able to rely on their family and feel safe. For instance, a children bran is in the process of development and cannot cope with stress and tension effectively.
On the other hand, there are two main evidences for other people to support the latter argument parents provide and nurture children a safe environment at home can avoid children from developing negative behavior. first and foremost, it is commonly accepted that to grow and develop properly, they need a surrounding which triggers a feeling of safety in them, so that relax their senses and calm their mind. A clear example being found to prove is that if the parents are abusive and fighting all the time, the child may develop a fear of them and act strangely. Equally important, there is no denying that when parents do not provide them a friendly environment they are more likely to develop anxiety and depression and this will cause them to develop aggressive and violent behavior later on in life. This is supported by the fact that A research study by the Guardian showed that 23% of the children in America developed some kind of violet and aggressive behavior as they were brought up by divorced parents.
All things considered, it is my strong belief that children should have a good environment and proper parenting in their children hood. ACCORDINGLY, I highly recommend that the government should enhance people awareness n terms of the responsibility of parents. if this recommendation s carried out, the comprehensive development of our society will be ensured
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...elax their senses and calm their mind. A clear example being found to prove is th...
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...terms of the responsibility of parents. if this recommendation s carried out, the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, well, for instance, kind of, no doubt, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2172.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08665105386 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73633860662 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3805076945 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.8 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4666666667 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428958752862 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13598554521 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945811963114 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279967591367 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106353471276 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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