Nowadays, school's awards are highly requested and they are point of discussion among two arrays. Who believes that school must reward students with high scores as well as who claims it is more important to rewards students who point out some improvements.
On the one hand, schools should reward best students with awards or scholarships. They make great efforts in order to build an excellent academic career so they are the better people who deserve a reward for their demanding work. However, the best students instead of being taken as a model for their classmates, are always object of jealousy. For this reason, a reward could isolate them more than they use to be.
On the other hand, the school should encourage students who show improvements. Not only because they recover the bad marks that they previously had, but also because these students are involved in studying. Furthermore, the class are more well-balanced with the result that the challenge between students contributes to an increase of a general performance.
In my opinion, schools mustn't create inequalities between classmates. For this reason, they need to reward in an equal way likewise these two groups of students.
- Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students how to judge right and wrong and how to behave well. Some say that teachers should only teach students about academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Some people think that school should reward students who show the best academic results while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements Discuss both views and give your own opinion 59
- Some people say that the only reason for learning foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign languageDiscuss both views and give your opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'reward the best'.
Suggestion: reward the best
...nts. On the one hand, schools should reward best students with awards or scholarships. T...
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Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'objected'.
Suggestion: objected
... model for their classmates, are always object of jealousy. For this reason, a reward ...
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Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...eward could isolate them more than they use to be. On the other hand, the school...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: mustn't
... performance. In my opinion, schools mustnt create inequalities between classmates....
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Message: Consider replacing "in an equal way" with adverb for "equal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s. For this reason, they need to reward in an equal way likewise these two groups of students. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, likewise, so, well, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16923076923 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69352353499 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605128205128 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8978224081 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6363636364 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377444610468 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145553895843 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136516616456 0.0667982634062 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218462840031 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100182267069 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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