Some people think sending criminals to prison is not an effective way to deal with them. Education and training are better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, an increase in the number of wrongdoers has put a burden on the government. There is a debate about whether offering education and job training or confinement in jail is the most effective solution to cope with them. From my point of view, imprisoning is the only solution in most situations, but in some cases, rehabilitation is better.
On the one hand, education and job training are more suitable options for juvenile delinquents or when the crimes are misdemeanors. Evidently, if people committing crimes in their teens or twenties are imprisoned, they will be free mostly by their thirties, the prime working age. By offering them suitable vocational skills or education, when coming back to society, young criminals can find a job and integrate into the community more easily. Similarly, misdemeanors happen mostly because of the lack of general knowledge or money. Therefore, providing essential training would enable them to distinguish between right and wrong as well as help them earn a living in the future. All these things lower the possibility of future re-offense.
On the other hand, incarceration is the most effective measure to deal with homicides or aggravated assaults. By imprisoning the perpetrators, they will be permanently kept away from the community and cannot cause further life losses. Additionally, drug and people traffickers are more dangerous because they destroy the whole future and family of the victims. These people are beyond redemption and should serve the maximum sentences, including capital punishment.
In conclusion, the ultimate purpose of any law is to create a better society, so depends upon the age and the type of offense, we should find the most appropriate solution such as giving opportunities to the young or heavily punishment to the murders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28373702422 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98731568939 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60553633218 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3669675854 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.071428571 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163419136278 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049636144188 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449967997083 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901826740209 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05032480959 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.