All parent are expected their children will become an essential person in the future. While some people think that children should be competed with others classmates in order to build their sense of competition, I believe that children should learn how to work together is more beneficial when they grow up.
On the one hand, Children who have been taught cooperated are more happiness than the other. They can co-operate with other classmates to seperate the pressure from individual to a group and working together can build their social communication skill which mean they will learn how to living with other in society. The true accomplishment is co-operate everyone's strength become a powerful group and use this power to contribute the society.
On the other hand, many parents are expected their children will become a useful person. The expectation from these parents have push that educational institution allocated the class of level by rank of children's ability in order to provide a competition environment. They believe that can inspire children's potential talent in term of compete with others classmates and children will receive the awareness from teacher if they won the competition. Most people believe this is the best way to encourage them to study harder which mean you will have more opportunities when you are better than the other. For example, if there is a competition of running, the best way to reach the top rank is practiced it in a competitive environment in order to inspire our potential power.
To sum up, in this modern society, although competition present our expectation to successful, but working together is the best way to be a useful person.
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- Some people prefer to relax by doing physical activities while others choose mental activities crosswords and chess etc Discuss both the views and given your opinion 67
- In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this massage 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: ''.
... in society. The true accomplishment is co-operate everyones strength become a powerful gr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1119133574 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78579218355 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512635379061 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.9154329751 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.727272727 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384301053207 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145051578309 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894127125845 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222550131467 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973607394733 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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