Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both of views and give your own opinion!
Competition is the way to reach some goals in life. The encouragement of competing with others has been taught between children by the teachers. As the drawbacks of competition are more numerous rather than the benefits, the method that children should compete each other is not essential any longer.
There are some negatives of encouraging children to challenge. The impetus to make children more competitive will create the arrogant mindset in their mind. This mindset will result the selfish children who don’t aware of their neighborhood. In addition, the possibility of being frustrated in children will increase as long as they fail to some particular challenges. Those drawbacks will affect the children’s character in the future.
Besides competing, evoking children to be supportive is more effective in children’s future life. The sense of cooperation will train them how to do something with others and create teamwork to achieve goals or targets. Moreover, when the children are taught to cooperate rather than compete, it will encourage their ability to socialize more with others. They will interact more with their friends and becoming more useful adults in the next years.
All in all, I believe that encouraging children to be more cooperative is more beneficial rather than we should train them to compete each other. The children will be the adults so that they need to be taught more regarding cooperation to obtain the achievement together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: ESSENTIAL_ESSENTIALLY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'essentially'?
Suggestion: essentially
...ildren should compete each other is not essential any longer. There are some negatives o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, regarding, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33760683761 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90553352483 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529914529915 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0799105785 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2142857143 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385438270114 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149501835829 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677032587977 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265971655769 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056516083885 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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