Some people think that several short holidays from school are better, while others think that one long summer holiday is better for children. Discuss and include your own opinion.
It is true said that" The holidays reason is perfect time to reflect on our blessings and seek out ways to make life better for those around us". This particular topic asserts that which one is better holiday for children; a short or long holiday. Short holidays is best but l believe that long one is also good. I shall explore the same in following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are some antagonists who believe that short holidays. They raise their view point by claiming that short holidays boost up energy of children. Moreover, they feel fresh as well as more energetic after some break from school. They concentrate more on their work as well. For instance, education minister of india has claimed that there should one short holiday for students for relaxation.
Probing ahead, some people believe that there are more merits of long holidays than short one. They believe on this assertion because students do not wander from right path when there is oy one holiday: short holidays. They worked hard to achieve their goal in short vocation. Further more, in return it increase their marks in theoratical as well as practical portion. A good epitome of this could be a survey conducted by delhi government and they also astonished to saw result as 93% of schools in delhi gave long summer holidays to students and in return students seem very happy and satisfied.
To conclude, I believe that both type of holidays is important for children in order to concentrate on their studies. Students should take benefits from holidays instead of wasting them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in short, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4450805286 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4416313129 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9375 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328136805347 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114851477167 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924034608822 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210608809601 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548123054218 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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