Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Modern humanity aims to explore everything that surrounds us. Due to up-to-date technology and scientific discoveries, mankind has a great opportunity to investigate the boundless space. However, the controversial question appears: do people, in fact, need space exploration rather than resolving actual “Earth problems”? While there are some good arguments in favour of maintaining researching far universe, I believe the resources and efforts should be sent, first of all, to solve crucial problems on our home planet.
Space exploration, obviously, is one of the major concerns nowadays. Moreover, the projects in this area has already shown some valuable insights for humanity. The challenge of ovepopulation and resources depletions is the general concern of scientists. Searching new planets (which are suitable for people’s life or which are abundant in essential resources) is what modern space science dealing with. In addition, by discovering the universe, scientists may explore new forms of life. They might be beneficial for mankind for some yet unpredicatable reasons. As it is usually shown in films, aliens can give people some tips on how to improve our being. That is why space exploration is worth continuing.
However, there are some faults with this reasoning. To begin with, meeting with inhabitants of unknown planets is impossible to predict. It may cause irreversible consequences for Earth: people never know what is in their minds. To add, the existence of aliens is a disputable concern: there are no scientific justifications in fabour of it. This way, people waste financial resources on what possibly even never exists. Finally, there is no one space discovery yet that could be an advantage in crucial mankind challenges such as pollution, poverty, obesity and so on.
Personally, I view space exploration in not an urgent case for Earth. Did you know that World Ocean has been explored by around 5% yet? It seems to be strange that mankind strives to subdue the universe while there are still so many unexplored points. Maybe sooner or later people can find all answers to their questions by studying their home planet?
To conclude, space exploration might be considered as a source of getting knowledge about other planets and of finding solutions to the world challenges. However, I feel such unpredictable discoveries may result in troublesome consequences. In my opinion, our planet still needs deep studying, therefore, the resources are better to spend on it rather than on unattainable space.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, i feel, in addition, in fact, such as, you know, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2159.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3975 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03721809391 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5925 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5967430245 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.36 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.56 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276375931703 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691446259681 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436205718277 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14732862088 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557575303708 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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