Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mainkind to continue to explore the universe in which we live.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Even before medieval period, space has always fascinated humans to a great extent. Immeasurable research and exploration of space has produced numerous fruitful results.
Scientists have been searching for existence of other lifeforms,aliens, and their way of survival in harsh climate of space. Besides that,as population is proliferating rapidly, space exploration shows probability for humans to live on other planets. In addition, concepts of warm hole as well as black hole allows researchers to think beyond existing technology. For instance today, people know how planets as well as stars take birth and that their can be parallel universes right next to them. Moreover, nowadays human can predict the weather and can even change it. Apart from that, it creates the possibilities for inexhaustible source of energy.
No doubt, space exploration can become Frankenstein model and also government need to invest more to remove unemployment, poverty and resource crisis. But as a matter of fact, it is due to space exploration that NASA scientists have sent OSIRIS-REx to beat down gigantic asteroid that can destroy earth in future. So it becomes irrefutable to think life and technology without exploring universe.
In my perception, denying the spellbounding and breathtaking pictures of either of cosmic luminosity or billion of galaxies would rather be insanity. More emphasis should be given to space exploration to discover unexplored possibilities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , aliens
...arching for existence of other lifeforms,aliens, and their way of survival in harsh cli...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
... in harsh climate of space. Besides that,as population is proliferating rapidly, sp...
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Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...igantic asteroid that can destroy earth in future. So it becomes irrefutable to think lif...
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Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...tures of either of cosmic luminosity or billion of galaxies would rather be insanity. M...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for instance, in addition, no doubt, as a matter of fact, as well as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59192825112 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12334333412 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686098654709 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.90972611 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9230769231 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225043049896 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738949944594 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506801794853 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118285043187 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044315961295 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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