Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Some people are of an opinion, that exploring our Universe is simply throwing money down the drain, while others argue that opinion and state it is of the most importance for all humanity to carry on with the research. I strongly believe, discoveries of this type are crucial for all of us and we can only benefit from them.
Are we alone in this universe is the question we always ask ourselves. Searching for extraterrestrial life and inhabitable planets is a dream a vast number of scientists pursue. A new planet, which can sustain human life, can solve numerous problems we have on our planet today. For example, overpopulation is becoming an enormous problem for us and finding a suitable planet ca be a possible solution for this predicament. Furthermore, aliens, who we presume are more advanced technologically and cognitive, can assist us with their knowledge across all fields.
On the other hand, there are groups of people who would like to use these founds differently. Redirecting those funds to areas that are more of need can dramatically change, help and even eliminate some significant global problems. For instance, it can be used to treat children with health problems, or to stop famine all around the world. With all the problems we can witness nowadays it is understandable why some want the space budget to be forwarded somewhere else.
In conclusion, exploring space will always require a very demanding budget that can be put to other use; however, the slightest possibility to discover intelligent life or a new planet we can colonize must not be ignored and we as a species should not give up.
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- ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum To what extend do you agree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 379, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (ca) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...for us and finding a suitable planet ca be a possible solution for this predicamen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89119495442 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607272727273 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8941229813 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186344343201 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695769086548 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550573272283 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124796393803 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474937485812 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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