Some people think that spending a lot of birthday celebration and weding wast of money but other things that it is important to young people and society.
The life style of people has undergone dramatic change couple of decades. Presently, it is considered by some people spend lavishly on birthday celebration and wedding is waste of money. While other claim that it is very curcial for for young people and society. There are numerious point to shore up the former view. First and foremost,poor incomes are also effect this type of functions to celebrate with great pomp and show thus destitute people can not afford such events for their childerns as a result it is highly effect the families budgets and increase the finanacial burden to the people. Moreover nowdays it is very difficult and hard nut to crack to content everyone. To demonstrate in bid parties people try best to give them but they can not satisfied the other masses through their show off. Other have conflicting views. Further points can be mentioned to support the latter view. Firstly now young people have tendancy to celebrate their parties in extend level is the part and parcel of life thus in this parties they invited their prominent celebrities in their house to show their good personality front for the other people and they had charm to celebration. Finally some parents are passionate to betow marvellous gift on their children birthdays. To illustrate parents are well aware about their children likes and dislikes as a result throught the magneficant gift they try to make stronge relationship between two generations. From my notion both aspects have their own significance. Undeniable, spending money with great extent some time make people extravagant and proves back breaking for a person. Thus, it is advisable to 'CUT YOUR COAT ACCORDING TO YOUR SUIT'. To recapitulate, it is universally acknowledged that 'money is made for human but human is not made for the money'. As a result, money spending according to their budget
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- Some people think that spending a lot of birthday celebration and weding wast of money but other things that it is important to young people and society. 56
- Some people think that spending a lot of birthday celebration and weding wast of money but other things that it is important to young people and society. 56
- The graph below shows the number of cars produced in three countries in 2003 2006 and 2009 Summarise the information below in your own words 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01294498382 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65365853583 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572815533981 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.2096141362 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1176470588 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270216777611 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086488827565 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102918691261 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270216777611 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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