Some people think the spread of multinational companies and globalization produce positive outcomes for everyone. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Globalization opened a new world of opportunities to national as well as international companies as well many developed and developing nations. Globalization has attracted lot of criticism around the world, especially from economists. However, handful of individuals believe that it is a positive development. I partially agree to the illustrated notion and forthcoming paragraphs would vindicate my inclination.
On the constructive part, the most prominent reason is boosting the economic development of developing countries. When multinational companies start their business in such regimes, there will be lot of employment opportunities and also results in infrastructure development of specific area. Moreover, local firms also get some benefits from this by way of supplying the raw materials to these companies they can find a global market for their products. Additionally, state legislations get huge amount of money as taxes and legal fees from these corporations. For instance, global brand products such as Apple, McDonald's and Nike pay heavy duty for the establishment of their distinct branches in multifarious counties. Hence, globalization promote the economy of every nation.
On the destructive part, the predominant reason is the environmental effects caused by international companies to host countries which attributes to various harmful diseases. Moreover, increased competition from the multinational companies may effect the local industries, sometimes it might result in close down of some old local businesses. Furthermore, these corporations are very powerful in the terms of finance and influence, this attributes in controlling the entire resources of a country which eventually creates monopoly and unfair trade practices. Thus, the negative effects of multinational firms results in plethora of miss leadings.
To recapitulate, indubitably globalization provides a lot of good effects but its negativities cannot be ignored which could be improved by government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93079584775 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44329082726 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63321799308 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7179851116 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.266666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160647055557 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479396185411 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033290943352 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832566937559 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368979395187 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.11 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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