Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety.
The safety of citizens inside the territory of a country should be the greatest concern of the government, as some accidents occur frequently. There are varying opinions among common folks to tackle the rise of car incidents, and my personal opinion is that there should be strict laws coupled with the combination of other methods, which are seemingly to make the roads more secure.
To begin with, citizens seem to abide by a law whenever they know that violation would cause severe retaliation. If the government would declare serious financial punishments for the most common type of the road violation, people including pedestrians would follow the rules thinking ahead any of their actions. Also, with the advancements in technology, the implementation of video observation should cover all areas, since some drivers may know the exact location of the recorders and exceed the speed in the blind zones. Subsequently, the risk of the accidents grow with the number of them. Thus, it is practical that if the punishments are bigger, the lower the chance of the citizens to disobey the rules.
On the other hand, there are already some cruel laws for the driving offenders such as deprivation of the driving license, money fines and even imprisonment. But in some cases, when the accidents are random and none of the participants are guilty, the government should deeply investigate the occurence and try not to let the same case happen again. First of all, from the very young ages we should make population aware of the devastating consequences of the traffic accidents. Moreover, lots of young drivers are given the license without the scrutinising their knowledge and skills and the vehicles that every driver exploits should be checked by the government for suitability, in order to prevent the incidents. Therefore, there are far more other ways for government to ensure the safety of movement.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that strict punishments for the felonies should be put ahead, and I also opine that there are some techniques with which the roads may be secure for all of the participants of the traffic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ackle the rise of car incidents, and my personal opinion is that there should be strict laws cou...
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Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... with which the roads may be secure for all of the participants of the traffic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in some cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06552706553 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77153656364 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552706552707 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3205826425 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.769230769 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250792840496 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793017809299 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671717739066 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156640439554 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496770659817 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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