It is apparent that history is believed to have an imperative role in the 21st century; thus, several people are in favor of learning history, whilst remaining ones consider it to be a wastage of time. According to my perspective, history is necessary for people, and further, both viewpoints are yet to be analyzed in the subsequent paragraphs.
The importance of history needs to be considered, which seems to be effective for mankind in certain ways. The first and foremost is understanding of cultural rituals and traditional things as history contains useful information that is lucrative for the modern people, whereby they come to know about the living style of how the people lived in the past. Moreover, it becomes easy to know about the contribution of forefathers in terms of the development of the country, thereby facing many problems in their life with the full of sacrifice.
Although studying history is said to be worthwhile. Having said that the negative of this and the benefits of other things cannot be overlooked. Firstly, learning about technology has tremendous importance because in this modern world technology is very valuable to perform any kind of task instead of history; therefore, it is a must for the development of present as well as future period. Secondly, the dates, names, and other concepts that are related to ancient times, very complicated to remember for a long time, and these are also not compulsory in the daily routine.
In conclusion, given the significance of history, it can never be termed negative, and hence, the learners should have similar attention towards history subject the same as others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...in certain ways. The first and foremost is understanding of cultural rituals and traditional thi...
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Line 2, column 543, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... their life with the full of sacrifice. Although studying history is said to be worthwhi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09594095941 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8495639501 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.6493308966 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.1 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133431881404 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538257715905 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345480340326 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803290367107 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375616711702 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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