Some people think that success is the best measure of intelligence whilst others think that intelligent can be measured in other ways. what is your opinion?
It is considered by many that, successfulness is the major and accurate indicator of reasoning. However, others argue that, intelligence can be evaluated by other methods, along with success. In this essay, we will discuss, how intelligence can be measured by counting achievements and using various other techniques.
It is argued by many that, high intellectual level is linked to triumph. A person is considered intelligent if he has excelled in his life. For instance, for job interviews in multinational companies, promotions are considered as golden points to avail a better job. Comprehension and victory are interconnected to human life in multiple aspects of endurance.
Although success is considered as an accurate indicator of comprehension, other ways of measurement cannot be denied. Knowledge is interlinked with brain power. A person is considered intuitive if he is knowledgeable about things related to daily life. In addition, the ability to learn new skills is also considered as an important aspect of mental capacity. Developing skills lead to creativity, ultimately, enhancing intellect.As an illustration, many schools in Pakistan, check the IQ level of children by checking their skills to solve riddles and other tricky questions.Moreover, presence of opportunities also relates to brain power.People living in affluent countries are facilitated by funds.To illustrate, In England, a major proportion of funds are allocated for students to facilitate them financially for research work. As a result, they excel in their profession, in contrary to, students from underdeveloped countries.
To conclude, success has a profound impact on evaluation of intelligence. Knowledge and skills also indicate intellect in a unique way. It is considered by many that, successfulness is the major and accurate indicator of reasoning. However, others argue that, intelligence can be evaluated by other methods, along with success. In this essay, we will discuss, how intelligence can be measured by counting achievements and using various other techniques.
It is argued by many that, high intellectual level is linked to triumph. A person is considered intelligent if he has excelled in his life. For instance, for job interviews in multinational companies, promotions are considered as golden points to avail a better job. Comprehension and victory are interconnected to human life in multiple aspects of endurance.
Although success is considered as an accurate indicator of comprehension, other ways of measurement cannot be denied. Knowledge is interlinked with brain power. A person is considered intuitive if he is knowledgeable about things related to daily life. In addition, the ability to learn new skills is also considered as an important aspect of mental capacity. Developing skills lead to creativity, ultimately, enhancing intellect.As an illustration, many schools in Pakistan, check the IQ level of children by checking their skills to solve riddles and other tricky questions.Moreover, presence of opportunities also relates to brain power.People living in affluent countries are facilitated by funds.To illustrate, In England, a major proportion of funds are allocated for students to facilitate them financially for research work. As a result, they excel in their profession, in contrary to, students from underdeveloped countries.
To conclude, success has a profound impact on evaluation of intelligence. Knowledge and skills also indicate intellect in a unique way.
- DANGERS OF SMOKING ARE WELL KNOWN, YET MANY PEOPLE CONTINUE WITH THIS HABIT.WHAT ARE THE CAUSES OF THIS? HOW CAN WE REDUCE SMOKING IN SOCIETY?GIVE REASONS FOR YOUR ANSWER, AND INCLUDE ANY RELEVANT EXAMPLES FROM YOUR OWN KNOWLEDGE OR EXPERIENCE. 73
- With increasing populations and ever growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved? 73
- It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree? 56
- The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disag 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 431, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...tivity, ultimately, enhancing intellect.As an illustration, many schools in Pakist...
^^
Line 6, column 577, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...olve riddles and other tricky questions.Moreover, presence of opportunities also relates...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 641, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
...portunities also relates to brain power.People living in affluent countries are facili...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 702, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...uent countries are facilitated by funds.To illustrate, In England, a major proport...
^^
Line 8, column 120, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a unique way" with adverb for "unique"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...edge and skills also indicate intellect in a unique way. It is considered by many that, success...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 431, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...tivity, ultimately, enhancing intellect.As an illustration, many schools in Pakist...
^^
Line 12, column 577, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...olve riddles and other tricky questions.Moreover, presence of opportunities also relates...
^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 641, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
...portunities also relates to brain power.People living in affluent countries are facili...
^^^^^^
Line 12, column 702, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...uent countries are facilitated by funds.To illustrate, In England, a major proport...
^^
Line 14, column 120, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a unique way" with adverb for "unique"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...edge and skills also indicate intellect in a unique way.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 13.1623246493 258% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 86.0 41.998997996 205% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2998.0 1615.20841683 186% => OK
No of words: 526.0 315.596192385 167% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69961977186 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49149649703 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.307984790875 0.561755894193 55% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 954.0 506.74238477 188% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 98.0271164299 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36666666667 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 8.67935871743 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187794582289 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621730947646 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960302009245 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12316614025 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117132167233 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.