Some people think that teachers should be resposible for teaching student to judge what is right and what is wrong. So that they can behave well. while others think that teachers should only teach academic subjects to students. Discuss both veiws and give your opinion.
With the steady growth in modernization, the lifestyle of people have been greatly affected. They have achieved various milestones. Nevertheless, the given topic asserts that, whether, it is the responsibility of teacher to teach the moral values to their pupils or only academic subjects? Through this essay, I will examine the dimensions of this topic and asseration and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side of argument, there are some people who argued that, the teacher should be teach the moral values to their students. The strenghten their veiw point by claiming that, if the teacher teach the moral values to their pupils, it is very beneficial for students who lived in ecofriendly environment. whereas, if the chlidren achieved good throughts from their teachers they will be set a good example in a whole world. Moving ahead, the teachers should be motivated their students through the moral values so, it is very important to teach a good thoughts in a schools. A recent survey conducted in India, there are most of teachers in India teach the moral values to their pupils and they encouraged their students to set a good example in the whole world.
Apart from this, there is an opposing group of masses who believe that, the teachers should only teach academic subjects to their students for achieved a good marks. Moreover, they believe that, it is responsibility of parents to teach the moral values to their children at the home and in a school they only learn about their syllabus.
Nevertheless, weighting both options, I believe that there is no single conclusion still, I take this ground that an effective clap requires the both uses of hands, However, the teacher should be teach the moral values as well as, teach the academic subjects to their students in a schools then, the pupils will be set a good example in a whole world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'taught'?
Suggestion: taught
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thought'?
Suggestion: thought
...o, it is very important to teach a good thoughts in a schools. A recent survey conducted...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a school' or simply 'schools'?
Suggestion: a school; schools
...y important to teach a good thoughts in a schools. A recent survey conducted in India, th...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the teachers') or simply say ''most teachers''.
Suggestion: most of the teachers; most teachers
...nt survey conducted in India, there are most of teachers in India teach the moral values to thei...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir children at the home and in a school they only learn about their syllabus. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'taught'?
Suggestion: taught
...f hands, However, the teacher should be teach the moral values as well as, teach the ...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...eacher should be teach the moral values as well as, teach the academic subjects to their s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, whereas, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88050314465 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60390271001 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443396226415 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.7559037447 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.333333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272066943516 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123175615624 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782494315425 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185649607328 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461704967651 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.