Nowadays, modern technology makes our life different,some people believe that technology brings peolple more comfortable. This essay disagree that technology made our life difficult. This essay will discuss both points of view.
It is clear that computers, mobiles and other gadgets are one of the most important things here in this generation. Because it helps people communicate easily for their love ones that are far from there place.It is therefore agreed that technology plays a beneficial part of our lives. For instance, when your far from your family and your living abroad it is easy for you to contact them just a click in your cellphone you can reach and talk with them.
However, many disagree for using technology as they see it more life harder. Sometimes people think that technology makes them lazy and they will just focus on it. For example, those children already exposed earlier to technologies are tend to be addicted and cannot concentrate to their studies.
Therefore, I conclude that technology is one of the beneficial things in our lives and the proper used of it must be applied to avoid problems.
- Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people think that technology has made our life too complex However other people think that it has made our life easier Discuss both views and give your opinion 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , some
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Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'disagrees'.
Suggestion: disagrees
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
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Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 187.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6274920968 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620320855615 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2554238858 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29823880455 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116367362407 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768772550113 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166525539534 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981165705569 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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