In recent years, juvenile offenses improve in both developed and developing countries alike. Thus the majority of people claim that younger people who break the law should be punished as the same way as older criminals. Personally, i strongly disagree with this opinion, as it leads to adverse consequences.
From the psychological point of view, teenager’s brain is more flexible than adults. As teens do not have an ability to compare the true from false, they can easily make make a mistake. As a result, it leads juveniles do an unlawful act. At this point, the parenting play a crucial role. If parents be more cautious to their teens, they can inhibit any possible fellow in early ages.
Secondly, teenager’s brain system is more variable than adult’s. Juveniles think distinctly than aged person. For instance, the goverment’s solution to preventing the breking laws is strict punishments for adults. However, if this solution implement on young criminals, they will continue to act as criminal , in particulary with more willingness. Eventually, as the number of younger criminals will climb , the goverment should be accountable for them.
To recaputulate, breakes of law should not be spared of punishment, yet i believe young offenders should be dealt with differently from adults.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34782608696 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10655674503 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4271844333 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.0714285714 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7857142857 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184524156691 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559072968481 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674841533311 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111656184817 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522956033798 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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