In last decades, education has become essential tool and plays important role in our lives. Thus, there is an opinion that people, especially students should enlarge their knowledges in many diverse subjects instead of mastering themselves just merely in one particular subject. From my point of view, i entirely agree that students should not be busy with one subject, it is because that they can encounter with problems.
To begin with, people confront with plenty of issues. Thus, there are plethora of solutions to overcome with it. However there is an exception, which is education. Therefore, students should specialize themselves in many subjects. For instance, if a man studied the only biology, he will be limited by mathematics abilities, which is more demanding in modern days. In addition, the majority of companies demand multitasking ability and knowledge. As a result, a person, who has broad knowledge on many subjects, will have a sufficient and valid job.
When it comes to the second reason to agree that broadening knowledge is more vital, it is the improvement of mentality. In precisely, if a person has a keen interest to learn and explore new things, he will overcome the issues, such as getting embarrassed around your relatives and acquaintances. For instance, there is a debate over about history in assembly, and you do not have any connection with history. Everyone suggests their ideas, while you are sitting in a silencing way. As a result, all members of gathering will understand that you are ignorant about this subject. Consequently, for not facing such problems people should learn all subjects.
On the other hand, knowing one subject, that you learnt by its details is better than enlarging knowledge in many subjects without details. For instance, literature is one of the subjects that you are master, and when there is a competition about this subject you can answer truly in a second. While others have less probability to respond the question correctly. Therefore, people should specialize in one specific science.
To sum up, studying solely a subject can have a positive impact, while it is better to have enlarge knowledge of sciences.
- Some people believe that a government's responsibility should provide care and financial support for people after they retire. Other said that people should help themselves. Do you agree or disagree, and what is your opinion? 11
- The extended family is less important now than it was in the past 76
- Some people think that museums and art galleries should concentrate on the history and art of their own country rather than the works of art of other parts of the world To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 89
- Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them. 3
- It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects to specialize in one specific subject. 83
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14606741573 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79799534168 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553370786517 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8516523498 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2380952381 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9523809524 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38095238095 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362346574549 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900547798774 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105835711792 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212935566485 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119780612961 0.0645574589148 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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