It is argued that some essential measures should be applied to control noise. While some individuals believe that they have the freedom to create as much noise as they need. In my opinion, I would argue that reducing noise is better and offers more advantages to society.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why people like to make noise as they want. Firstly, they feel comfortable and free when creating noise from some individual activities which are the usage of private vehicles and the entertainment events. For example, some youngsters hear favorite songs at the high volume that makes them feel relaxed after a long busy day, although it may disturb their next-door neighbor. Furthermore, some people consider that noise is a part of the industrialization and modernization process, therefore it is unavoidable. For instance, heavy industries often generate a large amount of noise during processes because there is numerous of vehicles. As a result, noise is an inevitable consequence of economic development and recreational activities.
On the other hand, I believe that it is beneficial to impose sufficient laws to strictly control noise. The major reason is that suffering from noise in a long-term may harmful impacts on people health. A good illustration for this is that if the citizens who are living nearby industrial zones, they may suffer from sleep deprivation at night because of intrusive sound. In consequence, it will definitely lead to a deterioration in their mental and physical health. In addition, the productivity of work may be also reduced due to noise. The number of white-collars worker report that they could not concentrate on their tasks because the work environment is polluted by the noise of traffic on the street.
In conclusion, it seems to me that noise should be limited in order to have a better life, although some people insist on making a lot of noise without any consideration for others.
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 87
- Some people say that what children watch influences their behaviour. Others believe the amount of time they spend on television influences their behaviour most. Discuss both view and give your opinion. 67
- Many university graduates leave university facing uncertainty and unemployment. What are the causes and effects? Offer some solutions. 78
- Children's education is expensive. In some countries, the government pays some or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages 73
- The world natural resources are being consumed at an ever-increasing rate. What are the dangers of this situation? What should we do? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se without any consideration for others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1375 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95039721902 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5590276129 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322352544638 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101671952893 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071542638252 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200128614861 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563465895668 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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