Some people think that they should not have to pay any tax and should be able to keep all the money that they earn. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Every individual works very hard to earn his livings, and therefore they are skeptical to pay a part of their income to the government. Many people are of strong opinion that they have the right to enjoy their whole livelihood earned without tax payment. In my opinion, although it may seem to be unfair, tax payment is very essential and plays a significant role in economic development of the nation.
To begin with, government needs funds to discharge its numerous responsibilities for the development of the country and the betterment of the society. These responsibilities include, services like, administrative, defense, infrastructure etc. These services are of utmost importance and eventually would prove to be advantageous for the people of the country as this money would return to them in some form of service. Therefore, people are the real beneficiaries and they are liable to pay taxes.
In addition to this, as single individual cannot take care of certain things by himself. As government takes such jobs on its shoulders, hence it needs money to do so. These funds can only be generated by the taxes paid by its citizens. For example, national defense, it provides security to the people. For defending people, it needs to be ready with the arms and ammunitions. The money for these demands can only be raised by the taxes paid by the citizens from their earnings. Moreover, it is a responsibility of the individual to contribute to the social and economic progress of the country.
To conclude, it is true that tax may seem to be burden, but it is the price that we have to pay for a civilized nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90579710145 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97134144542 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5532725783 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198025366063 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635491183864 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578611935019 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121401443652 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337828185183 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.