Without any doubt, society is divided into two groups according to their distinct mindset of different people. Therefore, this has become a debatable issue whether travelling abroad is a valuable experience or staying locally is to save the money and time particularly for younger ones. This essay will not only shed light on both perceptions but also my point of view will be elaborated in conclusion.
To commence with first notion, there are myriad things to be shard in its favor. First of all, travelling is the suitable way to explore the world where we can understand different cultural diversity and the second point is that our children can study any subject as per their choice from any international universities upon their individual taste for example, Indian students must travel to America to study about the advanced modern medicines.
Moving towards the second argument in this debate, the first point is that the investment of money and time for travel is unaffordable fort the financially unstable students, to mitigate this concern, government could have pressure on national banks to provide financial support such as interest free loan or avail scholarship for higher studies. For instance, SBI provide discounted interest loan for international students. Apart from this, born and rise in place is not a characteristic in this developed world. Now a day, travel and tourism is getting cheaper thus to get good experience from different countries are added advantage as our life is short we must be travelling as much as possible.
In conclusion, according to my perceptive, everyone should travel as long as it is possible although we will be understanding the situations of other peoples and countries how they survive to fulfill their livelihood and daily life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...long as it is possible although we will be understanding the situations of other peoples and cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19031141869 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84592347411 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626297577855 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.037666244 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.0 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145700466941 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531378896262 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455596780157 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842513309619 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303187976847 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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