Some people think tv is good for us, while others argues that television has many disadvantages. Discuss both views.
In this concurrent world, undoubtedly true that a small screen play role important in each person life. Majority of people concur that TV have a lot of negative impact in life cycle, while, others oppose this because many stead generated by TV and have a big effect for life. I will examine both viewpoints and convey the opinion.
Many evidence to underpin this statement that TV have million advantages one of the concrete reason is very informative and become source of information. For explains futher, each individual gather issues from different informant with distinct views even we know about what happen in the world. As illustration, survey conducted in Sydney in the year 2014 has found that more than 60% of resident hear trend and incident outside by TV. The most important one from TV is we learn about cerenomial some countries and we study foreign language by online and it is will increase our skills because in fundamentally language is a vital part in life. According to an article published in "The Week", percentage of people talking with foreign language and get education from TV was increased from 24% to 78% nowdays.
On the other hand, TV also offer few asymmetry for life. In other words, many stations TV showing programmes thats nothing impact for life or just made bad insight particularly for youngster. Moreover, addicted in TV show made someone forget about other activities and became lazy to do some exercise. For instace, my young brother always forget about his homework because almost 24 hours on screen. This attitude made someone forgetting about what is the positive activities in life.
To conclude, bearing in mind both these sets of arguments, TV will handy when people use it with the right way, and vice versa with others people.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun stead seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much stead', 'a good deal of stead'.
Suggestion: much stead; a good deal of stead
...ycle, while, others oppose this because many stead generated by TV and have a big effect f...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun evidence seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much evidence', 'a good deal of evidence'.
Suggestion: Much evidence; A good deal of evidence
...oth viewpoints and convey the opinion. Many evidence to underpin this statement that TV have...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...to underpin this statement that TV have million advantages one of the concrete reason i...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun asymmetry seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little asymmetry'.
Suggestion: little asymmetry
...days. On the other hand, TV also offer few asymmetry for life. In other words, many stations...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ds, many stations TV showing programmes thats nothing impact for life or just made b...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ats nothing impact for life or just made bad insight particularly for youngster. ...
^^
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'forgets'.
Suggestion: forgets
...eover, addicted in TV show made someone forget about other activities and became lazy ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'forgets'.
Suggestion: forgets
...s on screen. This attitude made someone forgetting about what is the positive activities i...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98327759197 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58539460754 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625418060201 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2265035857 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.428571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227243729603 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766007867789 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575163615179 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136740361172 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253241506033 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun stead seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much stead', 'a good deal of stead'.
Suggestion: much stead; a good deal of stead
...ycle, while, others oppose this because many stead generated by TV and have a big effect f...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun evidence seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much evidence', 'a good deal of evidence'.
Suggestion: Much evidence; A good deal of evidence
...oth viewpoints and convey the opinion. Many evidence to underpin this statement that TV have...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...to underpin this statement that TV have million advantages one of the concrete reason i...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun asymmetry seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little asymmetry'.
Suggestion: little asymmetry
...days. On the other hand, TV also offer few asymmetry for life. In other words, many stations...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ds, many stations TV showing programmes thats nothing impact for life or just made b...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ats nothing impact for life or just made bad insight particularly for youngster. ...
^^
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'forgets'.
Suggestion: forgets
...eover, addicted in TV show made someone forget about other activities and became lazy ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'forgets'.
Suggestion: forgets
...s on screen. This attitude made someone forgetting about what is the positive activities i...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98327759197 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58539460754 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625418060201 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2265035857 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.428571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227243729603 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766007867789 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575163615179 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136740361172 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253241506033 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.