Some people think young people are much more influenced by friends than parents or teachers. Do you agree or disagree. In
It is reality that people have often influence by others to see their personalities and so on. Even though, a section of society deems that youngsters have lots of attracted from their peers as compared to procurators or educators. However, I agree with this prospective because they both have shared same age periods and spend lots of time together.
The main one factor of influencing among adults by age mates is that they both are sharing similar age times due to these it is natural to be attract on each other’s personalities by same age group. In addition to this, due to similar age their thinking, ideas and activities are same as compared with parents or teachers. Moreover, the young people easily influenced to see the lifestyle of their peers as well as they both are energetic to play many outdoors activities rather than guardians are elder and not perform some things like their offsprings. For example, a survey by newspaper in 2018 shows that a vast number of young people are more influenced by peers that is why some juveniles perform criminal activities because some times they are sharing bad companies of their friends.
The another major reason is that a majority of adults have spend lots of time with age mates in schools, institutes and another places as well as youngsters like to utilise their time with peers. Furthermore, they freely share their problems and secrets with friends and sometimes friends offer them right solutions about hurdles. Apart from this, some young ones like to study in the company of peers and well concentration on education as well as some time useful to solve problems of each other in any subjects. For instance, a survey by media reported that 7 out of 10 young people like to living in the company of peers rather than guardians and trainers.
In conclusion, although, a huge amount of youngsters have attracted from age mates than mother and father or teachers because the age of both are similar and expand lot of amount of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...eason is that a majority of adults have spend lots of time with age mates in schools,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84548104956 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57867064251 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481049562682 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.3684071785 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.5 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5833333333 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17443333698 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727697389199 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601687425826 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993029117486 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599496602408 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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