Some people think young people should be free to choose their job, while others believe that they should be realistic and think about their future.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today's world, young one's are in a hurry to attain a job to be independent in life. It is argued by some that adults should be given freedom to choose their job whereas others claim that they must be practical and have a thought about future. This essay will discuss both views and provide a clear opinion.
Some people believe that young people will be free to choose their field of job. It is of para amount importance because then only they can find their passion and interested field which will eventually give them a feel of satisfaction and happines. If they are given a chance to decide a job that suits them, they will work hard towards it and great success. As choosing job which is not like by an individual might creates frustration, unhappiness and no success later in life.
On the other side, some others argue that they should think about the future aspects and must be realistic in selecting a job. It seems that rather than moving with passion it is relevant to go with demand jobs. Since, it gives status and money when choosing in-demand job. For instance, IT sector is gaining fame and there are plethora of opportunities in this field and can get a good salary. Instead of following passion, one must follow future oriented fields which provide great opportunities.
Finally, I believe that there is only one life and every young one's out there should understand their likes and dislikes and must be free to choose their job.
To conclude, in my opinion, I would argue that young people should decide by their own in choosing a job. Otherwise, they will regret after some years. There is only one life and make decisions wisely. Young people are the backbone of society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, whereas, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58921161826 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34377034147 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572614107884 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.251589414 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0769230769 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.491293761508 0.244688304435 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159259001493 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147476679638 0.0667982634062 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284619004915 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474403574006 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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