Some people think zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, others think zoos are useful to protect the rare animals. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Zoo is one of the most common entertaining places for many people. Nevertheless, it is argued by some people that zoos are so merciless that they should be stopped opening. I do believe that in spite of some inconveniences that zoos bring to animals, they help to protect endangered animals from distinction.
Many people belive that incarcerating animals in cages are extremely cruel as their living habitat is limited in some square meters in stead of a savanna or a jungle. People offer animals food and artificial living space, eradicating animals’s natural habitat such as preying or immigrating. In other words, zoos prevent animals from naturally growing and eliminating their instincts. Therefore, it can be said that zoos conserves wild animals but such creatures are not as savage as they are when they live in nature.
Nonetheless,it is undeniable that zoos play an essential role in saving rare animals from extinction. Obviously, zoos provide a sanctuary for endangered species, hence people can reduce their risk of becoming extinct, then scientists can research and conserve animals’ genes to maintain the balance of ecosystem and protect biodiversity. Additionally, as zoos are a popular place for leisure of children, we can hold lessons there to educate young people about nature and raise their love and respect to natural world.
In conclusion, opening or closing zoos are still a controversy in many countries but I do believe that we should remain operating such kind of public place. We should create a more friendly living space for animals to reduce the limitations of an artificial life in zoos.
- Some people think zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed However others think zoos are useful to protect the rare animals Discuss both these views and give your opinion 73
- Some people think zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed However others think zoos are useful to protect the rare animals Discuss both these views and give your opinion 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, still, then, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20532319392 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89702901455 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58174904943 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9911607283 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.083333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292042876828 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118410242475 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452031503563 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18506113798 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520301251815 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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