Some people thinks that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures could be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, the number of traffic accidents have increased dramatically. Some people argue that harsh punishments are the optimal way to lessen them while others think that it could be more efficient to better road safety by other measures.This essay will look into both perspectives and provide my own opinion.
Penalties could be an effective way to improve drivers' awareness. As everybody appreciates the value of money they obtain,no one wants to be castigated and pay a heavy fine. Being punished, they will be more alert and aware of the responsibility of their actions. Harsh punishments can make threats against them that they are not allowed to commit any mistakes on the road.For example, in Vietnam, many old men used to defy the law and they often drank beer before driving, however, when the government mete out punishment with a heavy hand, hardly do people have driving offences and the traffic accident rate is decreasing remarkably.
However, it is true that other measures are also a solution to this traffic problem.People should be taught about traffic and how to ride or drive some means of transport carefully since they are teenagers or school-leavers. Government can also organize weekly classes for people and also children to come and assimilate their knowledge about traffic.It is also important to propagandize traffic awareness since it can affect people directly and prevalently.Many strict laws should be introduced to make people more cautious of not being a law-abiding citizens.
In conclusion, personally, I think it is extremely integral to combine harmoniously these two ways to reinforce the effect on all residents.Government should not only impose laws, fines, sentences,... but it's also ought to adopt other possible measures to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2972027972 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05901695369 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.396508323 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.5 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339445900122 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118678784569 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790871382752 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192400689735 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845533454451 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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