Some people use social media to keep in touch with other people and news events.Do you think advantages of this technology outweigh the disadvantages?
In today's world, tracking news events and socializing with others through social media has become a norm. While there are admittedly several drawbacks, I believe that the positives of this tendency are more considerable.
On the one hand, using social media to communicate with others or follow news broadcasts has certain disadvantages. First, we still need to exercise caution regarding the veracity of the news reports.Therefore, the report's source should be verified before it is made public. In addition, some people who lack discipline may spend their whole day online doing nothing productive.
On the other hand, it is a quicker and more effective method of getting news. Broadcast spreading on social networks is quicker and more broadly than traditional print techniques since there is no need to produce and distribute paper-based materials. Moreover, everyone may now update the occurrence because of the time and place in where we live. Therefore, it is simple to find the most recent broadcast and updates about a certain social event on the social network. It is also worth mentioning that, the ability to easily interact with people can be provided via social media.Thanks to the development of technology, family members may remain in touch with one another no matter where they are or what time it is. For example, although my family and I are currently living in different cities, we are still able to comment on or discuss posts or pictures that others have posted on Facebook or Instagram.
Take everything into consideration, while the usage of social networks is not without harmful aspects,I would content that given advantages make it become a good idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17216117216 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8384000623 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630036630037 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6978318555 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.666666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27503820718 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903197997276 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778431837436 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156058314957 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648906369108 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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