Some people use technology to take advice for their medical problems rather than seeing to doctor. Why this is so. It is positive or negative development according to you.
Human being rely on the internet due to the technological advancement.Which has made the world a global village.The people rely on internet to find the solutions related to the health issues.
To begin with,we should understand that in ancient times the nomadic science was the eminent one to get rid of health problems,but now it is unexpected that these types of ways would reduce the health problems.Inspite of that ,we try to find best and define the right one.As an instance,a person suffering from bad cold can avoid to consult a doctor and waiting in the queue by finding the easiest way.
On the flipside,the internet has made human biengs technophobs they surf the internet for major and minor concerns.Basically, humans are ment to search health regarding issues.Though it is the simplest way for finding the solution but it has a plethora of negative impacts.As an example,a patient has been suffering from cardiac arrest and admitted in intensive care unit his family cannot surf the sites to get rid of that.
Furthermore,their are several vlogs and Youtube channel's which are exactly doing their jobs as the purpose of money making.It doesnot matter that they consist genuine or fake information.We should avoid taking help of sites for health that might be dig us into the toughest problems.Suppose,a person have doub about cancer and he started taking drugs that has been recommended on the site.He might get affected because taking drugs without consulting the doctor seems to be the biggest mistake.
In conclusion,surfing the internet hepls us about our doubts and increase our knowledge too,but regarding health issues we should not surely rely on it as it has much demerits than merits.
- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting universities studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do this. 61
- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this could be better spent elsewhere? 61
- Some people use technology to take advice for their medical problems rather than seeing to doctor. Why this is so. It is positive or negative development according to you. 67
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. 61
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?What other measures do you think might be effective? 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, regarding, so, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07405203573 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.697119146 49.4020404114 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 288.0 106.682146367 270% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.0 20.7667163134 270% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0868213408119 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439346919313 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279693994794 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0439346919313 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279693994794 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.8 13.0946893788 235% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.1 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.42 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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