Some people use technology for taking advice related to medical problems rather than going to doctor. Why is this so ? what do you think is positive or negative development?
On the one hand, there are many benefits of taking advice online rather than going to a doctor. Firstly, it reduces the people's expenditure while taking the suggestions regarding medical obstacles. To be more precise, if Masses get information online about their treatment ,then they do not go to a doctor. So, they do not need to use any type of transport means save their travelling cost. Thus, online suggestion of medical problems help people to save their capital. Secondly, it can save persons time because online method is based on internet. To elaborate, thanks to technology which provide us fast internet services by which masses can get information by just one click at anywhere it means people cannot need to consult with doctor which waste their time in travelling. Therefore, less time is consumed in taking online suggestion about medical difficulties as compared to consultation with doctor.
In contrast, this phenomenon of suggestion have a negative in development in terms of losses of doctors and giving fake information to patients. To begin with the losses of Doctors. In other words, if people do not prefer to consult with doctor then how doctors can earn money because doctors take their fesse only of their suggestions. Hence, the earnings of doctors have advers effect from this suggestion method. Furthermore, wrong information is hazardous for consumer. In explanation, any people can upload any information on internet that's why people who are seeking for solution of medical problems get wrong suggestions, causes problems for them in treatment. Resultantly, online method do not give guarantee of accurate suggestion about any medical treatment.
To conclude, although taking online suggestion of diseases save money and time, but, I think it causes negative development by giving wrong suggestion and by reducing profits of doctors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, i think, in contrast, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30303030303 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80653414438 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52861952862 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6907495956 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4375 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279930756009 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925275883548 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567415908024 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176161018783 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570703541956 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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