Some people work long hours and hard to achieve success and some give importance to free time for them. Give your opinion and discuss your views.
Nowadays, the question “whether long hours working brings prosperity or not?” has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world. It is a widely held view that having a rewarding job is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common view that having a decent job plays a vital role in everyone’s prosperities. First and foremost is that they will be able to cover all their basic demands and educational expenditure. Secondly, it can be argued that those who work for long hours profit from remarkable income to enjoy a high standard of living. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that the majority of fame people have spent their time by hard working to reach their aspirational goals and popularity. A group of social scientists, working at prestigious university conducted that those people who work long hours could climb the summit of success in terms of art, science, and trade. Also, they will be able to strengthen their emotional bond.
However, there is no doubt that work endlessly provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that an extensive range of hard-working people suffers from emotional and psychological disorders. Moreover, their families neglected as a result of hardworking as well as they will not have this opportunity to participate in social activities.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree that an informed decision must be taken into consideration to keep a balance between work and life. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce strict legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1637630662 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97535270495 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613240418118 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2408800971 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147235593751 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486978514043 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459774427805 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807909676104 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285401301131 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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