some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Working for the same organization all life or to work for different organizations is a hot topic and very relevant to economy these days. It is the topic people find felicity to talk about or to pass a riff about it but it’s the topic which relates to the majority of our economy eventually. It is very rare for people to work long for the same company but if they do it, they are considered to be very valuable and experienced for the company and on the other hand some people say that a person gets tired by working for the same organization for very long and he should be changing posts or jobs at least few times in a lifetime. So, in my opinion I am in favor of both statements because both have goods and flaws.
Criteria differs in organizations depending on the priorities, qualities, skills and personality aspects which is very highlighted approach for companies to categorize employees. If a person works for an organization a long time so that is sure for him to get few add up/ plus points as compared to the fresh employees i.e. getting more incentives and getting golden handshakes. Moreover, if a person is considered to be an experienced one he can be hired for a suggestion boards. Opposing these things changing jobs gives you opportunity to learn more things and you are considered to be more adaptive in multiple environments that is the reason opportunities of getting better jobs increase. There is another factor that if a person will not try anywhere else for new opportunities then how he will get something better. The question in favor of second statement is that why not choose better than before? Ignoring the loyalty issues.
- Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
- In many countries children are engaged in different kinds of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it a valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion? 67
- some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 56
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'at least', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220447284345 0.247107183377 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.17571884984 0.155533422707 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0862619808307 0.0946595960268 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0575079872204 0.0501214627716 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0511182108626 0.0437548338989 117% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121405750799 0.122226691241 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0511182108626 0.0403226058552 127% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82298157899 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0415335463259 0.0326793684256 127% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105431309904 0.0861772015684 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0127795527157 0.021408717616 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0159744408946 0.011925033212 134% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1660.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 292.0 316.048096192 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68493150685 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.308219178082 0.374742101984 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239726027397 0.28420135186 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171232876712 0.203846283523 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119863013699 0.137316102897 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82298157899 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.037074148 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544520547945 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 55.8059007181 60.7387585426 92% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 24.3333333333 20.7743622355 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.6652542246 49.517814964 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.333333333 127.492653851 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7743622355 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.814263465372 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38877755511 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 48.3059360731 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.38202247191 1.69124875643 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396980446914 0.332605444948 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0993792929311 0.102741220458 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0793812812016 0.0668466124924 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.440830086312 0.534860350844 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181699355972 0.148594505496 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145586713637 0.134430193775 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106883857748 0.0742795772207 144% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.421839214527 0.324371583561 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0 0.0638462369009 0% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323506891196 0.228012699653 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978901832826 0.058150111329 168% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.