Some say that it is better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of traveling to workplace everyday.What are the advantages and the disadvantages of working at home ?

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Some say that it is better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of traveling to workplace everyday.
What are the advantages and the disadvantages of working at home ?

Submitted by Al Danie on Fri, 07/20/2018 - 02:46

Some assert that working at home is better than going to fieldwork. Although there are several benefits for workers work while staying at home such as sparing time and more comfortable desk, I believe that its drawbacks such as feeling bored and being indiscipline can be considered.

On the one hand, the proponents of this notion might perceive that no time spent on the way benefits the employees. This is because the workforces are encouraged to save their money and even their time. They would be unable to be fatigued due to traffic congestion and other troubles during the journey to the office. In addition, getting in work at home means that the agents could set their working zone up to themselves. By doing this, a more convenient work area might be coming true. As an illustration, most of my colleagues permitted to work as they are staying at home, arrange their room of working like they want. They put ornaments they love surround their desk, and even they take a meal and play a mobile phone while working which are forbidden to do in office. They cite those things provide such a comfortable zone to work.

On the other hand, the opponents of this might insist that working from home leads to a dull circumstance. It is because working at home means working without any friends and traveling. While others perform some duties are accompanied and consoled by many friends, the ones carrying out their assignments at home would felt a tedious condition. Furthermore, another demerit of this issue is getting difficulties to control. They would tend to not focus on the tasks they are conducting due to feel-free working situations. For instance, a recent survey of a company where I work for, illuminated that seven in ten of employees working at home, were late to submit their duties.

In conclusion, I believe that this occurrence has negative sides such as easy to be bored and indiscipline attitudes, while its positive sides such as no need to spend time on the way and a convenient work zone can be considered.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82051282051 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65326459075 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521367521368 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1457562079 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5294117647 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286907313355 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11571996079 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104069674781 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188968850445 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100908850013 0.056905535591 177% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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