Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace everyday.
Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?
Homeworking is an issue which has recently sparked a myriad of controversial debates. Whilst there is a school of thought which contends that working from home instead of daily travelling to the place of work would do both individuals and society better. I side with this opinion.
One of the main reasons why working from home would be beneficial to employees is the boost for staff satisfaction. By working in the private area, employees can manage their own time and strike a balance between work and rest. Similarly important is that, without the presence of their immediate supervisors, they would feel stressful and more comfortable. These two parameters both play a critical role in job satisfaction and productivity.
Another point to note is that several road accidents stemmed from daily commuting to working places. Needless to say, homeworking would serve as the optimal solution to this problem. Working from home spares job holders from the need of engaging in traffic during peak hours, which would minimise substantially the probability of vehicle accidents on the way to the office.
Some may argue that integrating homeworking in one’s business would result in the loss of team spirit and difficulty in staff training. This notion is fallacious. With the advent of the Internet, numerous applications and websites emerge, providing workers and their colleagues with the most effective communication tools to increase the mutual interactions at ease. Furthermore, the familiarization of young generations with online learning is a facilitator for their grasps of pre-recorded training videos.
In conclusion, there are various benefits obtained from homeworking, e.g, enhancing employees’ satisfaction and reducing traffic accidents. The pessimism about the lack of team interactions and dilemma in apprenticeship is ungrounded.
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Suggestion: Similarly,
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, similarly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57950530035 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12665543811 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625441696113 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7198223904 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320825249587 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844013161313 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110139616858 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162731011121 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971561701424 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.